[{"name":"S2-2008428","title":"General cleanup of specification","source":"Ericsson","contact":"Shabnam Sultana","contact-id":21207,"tdoctype":"CR","for":"Approval","abstract":"Summary of change: [Change-1, impacted clauses: 4.3.2] Remove '(s)' in 'PDU Session ID is not used for any existing PDU Session(s) of the UE' [Change-2, impacted clauses: 4.11.1.2.1] Step 18 of \u00a7 4.11.1.2.1 changed to refer to step 18 instead of step 11 of clause 5.5.1.2.2 in TS 23.401 [Change-3, impacted clauses: 4.11.2.3] Figure 4.11.2.3-1 step 6 aligned with step description and last valid step to refer to i.e. 'steps 15-19c' [Change-4, impacted clauses: 4.11.2.2] Step 7 and step 10 of Figure 4.11.2.2-1 corrected referenced figure and TS 23.401. [Change-5, impacted clauses: 4.11.2.3] Not existing reference removed from step 1 [Change-6, impacted clauses: 4.3.3.2] Step description in Step 1b in 4.3.3.2 is aliged with the figure. [Change-7, impacted clauses: 4.2.2.2.2] Step 14d of figure 4.2.2.2.2-1 changed 'Nudm_UECM_DeregistrationNotify' to 'Nudm_UECM_DeregistrationNotification' [Change-8, impacted clauses: 5.2.3.5.2, 5.2.3.5.3, 5.2.3.5.4, 5.2.3.6.2, 5.2.3.6.3, 5.2.3.6.4, 5.2.3.6.5, 5.2.3.7.2, 5.2.3.7.3, 5.2.5.5.4, 5.2.5.7.2, 5.2.5.7.3, 5.2.5.7.4, 5.2.6.2.2, 5.2.6.2.3, 5.2.6.2.4, 5.2.6.3.2, 5.2.6.3.3, 5.2.6.3.4, 5.2.6.3.5, 5.2.6.3.6, 5.2.6.3.7, 5.2.6.3.8, 5.2.6.4.2, 5.2.6.4.3, 5.2.6.4.4, 5.2.6.4.5, 5.2.6.5.2, 5.2.6.5.3, 5.2.6.6.2, 5.2.6.6.3, 5.2.6.6.4, 5.2.6.7.2, 5.2.6.7.3, 5.2.6.7.4, 5.2.6.7.4A, 5.2.6.7.5, 5.2.6.7.6, 5.2.6.8.2, 5.2.6.8.3, 5.2.6.8.4, 5.2.6.9.2, 5.2.6.9.3, 5.2.6.9.4, 5.2.6.9.5, 5.2.6.10.2, 5.2.6.11.2, 5.2.6.11.3, 5.2.6.11.4, 5.2.6.11.5, 5.2.6.12.2, 5.2.6.12.3, 5.2.6.12.4, 5.2.6.13.2, 5.2.6.13.3, 5.2.6.13.4, 5.2.6.13.5, 5.2.6.14.2, 5.2.6.14.3, 5.2.6.14.4, 5.2.6.15.2, 5.2.6.15.3, 5.2.6.15.4, 5.2.6.15.5, 5.2.6.16.2, 5.2.6.16.3, 5.2.6.16.4, 5.2.6.17.2, 5.2.6.17.3, 5.2.6.17.4, 5.2.6.18.2, 5.2.6.18.3, 5.2.6.19.2, 5.2.6.19.3, 5.2.6.19.4, 5.2.6.21.2, 5.2.18.2.1, 5.2.18.2.2, 5.2.18.2.3 ] Align service operations with the template in clause A.5 i.e.replace all 'Outputs (required)' with ' Outputs, Required' 'Outputs (optional)' with 'Outputs, Optional' 'Inputs (required)' with 'Inputs, Required' 'Inputs (optional)' with 'Inputs, Optional' [Change-9, impacted clauses: 4.2.3.2, 4.9.2.2, 4.11.5.2, 4.11.5.4, 4.12.8] Correcting usage of '3GPP' and '3G access' to 3GPP access. Figure 4.9.2.2-1 step 3 corrected. Also, correcting non-3GPP to 'non-3GPP access' when applicable. 'PDU Session via 3GPP PDU Session' changed to ' PDU Session via 3GPP access'. [Change-10, impacted clauses: 4.15.4.1] In clause 4.15.4.1 '3GPP NFs' changed to '5GC NFs' and 'are' changed to 'is'. [Change-11, impacted clauses: 5.2.3.3.1] Allowed area changed to Allowed Area [Change-12, impacted clauses: 4.8.2.2, 4.8.2.3, 4.11.1.2.1, 4.12.2.1, 4.12.2.2, 4.12.5, 4.12.6, 4.12.7, 4.12a.2.1, 4.12a.2.2, 4.12a.5, 4.12a.7, 4.12b.1, 4.12b.2, 4.13.3.8, 4.22.7, 4.22.10.3] Replace all access network with Acess Network, and radio access network with NG-RAN as applicable. [Change-13, impacted clauses: 4.13.6.1] In step 7, the reference to the N2 based HO procedure in EPS fallback for IMS voice procedure in removed and the reference to the 5GS to EPS HO procedure (4.11.1.2.1) is moved to appropriate part of the sentence. [Change-14, impacted clauses: 4.11.0a.2, 4.11.0a.5, 4.11.1.2.2.2, 4.11.1.2.3, 4.11.4.3.1, 4.11.4.3.6, 4.13.6.1, 4.13.6.3, ] Replace all SMF+PGW-C, SMF\/PGW with PGW-C+SMF And the ' PGW-C+SMF+PGW-C ' with 'PGW-C+SMF' Also replace 'PGW \/ SMF \/ UPF' to 'PGW-C+SMF' in Figures 4.13.6.1-1 and 4.13.6.3-1. [Change-15, impacted clauses: 4.2.2.2.2] Change IAB node to IAB-node [Change-16, impacted clauses: 4.12.2.3] Change Allowed S-NSSAI to Allowed NSSAI. [Change-17, impacted clauses: 4.2.2.2.3, 4.2.7.1, 4.2.8a, 4.23.4.3] Change to consistent usage of AMF Set e.g. not AMF set. [Change-18, impacted clauses: 4.4.3.5, 5.2.5.3.2, 5.2.5.3.3, 5.2.6.2.2, 5.2.7.2.2, 5.2.8.3.1, 5.2.12.2.1, 5.2.19.2.2] Change Application identifier to Application Identifier when an IE Also, change Application ID to Application Identifier (also in Figure 4.4.3.5-1) [Change-19, impacted clause:","secretary_remarks":"CC#3. r05 was considered. 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{"name":"S2-2008697","title":"General cleanup of specification","source":"Huawei (Rapporteur)","contact":"Marco Spini","contact-id":8356,"tdoctype":"CR","for":"Approval","abstract":"Summary of change: The following changes are proposed: Terminology corrections (PDU Session, QoS Flow, 5GS Bridge, Session-AMBR) Replacement of 'Application ID' with 'OSAppId' in clause 6.1.2.2 and Annex A to align with the definition and the URSP rule structure in clause 6.6.2.1 Replacement of 'Application ID' with 'application identifier' in clause 6.1.2.3.1 to align with the rest of the text in the clause Abbreviation added for Background Data Transfer (BDT) and used consistently as BDT Policy in clause 6.1.2.4 Removal of double mentioning of 'network area information' in clause 6.1.2.4 Correction of Note 11 in clause 6.1.3.5 ('DN failure'->'DDN failure') Usage of correct terms 'Authorized Session-AMBR' and 'Authorized default 5QI\/ARP' in clause 6.1.3.6 and 6.2.2.4 Correction of terminology ('IEEE 802.1') and addition of references in clause 6.1.3.23 (originally proposed by S2-2004907) Addition of missing 'DN authorized' to 'Session AMBR' in clause 6.2.1.2 Replacement of 'SM-related' with 'session management related' in clause 6.2.1.4 and 6.2.1.5 Completion of sentence in 6.2.9 Correction of punctuation and upper\/lower case starting letter in several lists Several editorial corrections (e.g. typos) Make [7] Void in clause 2 because this is not referred Replacement of 'credit' with 'quota' (as CHF provides quota for the management of converged charging) apart from event trigger related statements having 'credit' as part of their name","secretary_remarks":"r01 agreed. Revised to S2-2009346.","agenda_item_sort_order":6,"ainumber":"4.2","ainame":"Mega editorial CRs for TS 23.501 \/ TS 23.502 \/ TS 23.503","tdoc_agenda_sort_order":11040,"status":"revised","reservation_date":"2020-11-09 09:11:42","uploaded":"2020-11-09 18:57:44","revisionof":"","revisedto":"S2-2009346","release":"Rel-16","crspec":"23.503","crspecversion":"16.6.0","workitem":[{"winame":"TEI16"},{"winame":"5GS_Ph1"}],"crnumber":503.0,"crrevision":"","crcategory":"F","tsg_crp":"","lsreplyto":"","lsto":"","Cc":"","lsoriginalls":"","lsreply":"","link":"https:\/\/www.3gpp.org\/ftp\/tsg_sa\/WG2_Arch\/TSGS2_142e_Electronic\/Docs\/S2-2008697.zip","group":"S2","meeting":"S2-142-e","year":2020,"uicc_affected":null,"me_affected":null,"ran_affected":null,"cn_affected":null,"clauses_affected":null,"crsinpack":null,"crsinpacknumber":0},
{"name":"S2-2009068","title":"Mega CR to clean up","source":"Nokia, Nokia Shanghai Bell (Rapporteur)","contact":"Devaki Chandramouli","contact-id":68275,"tdoctype":"CR","for":"Approval","abstract":"Summary of change: High level changes summarized: Definition for pre-configured QoS (already existing text in QoS section made more prominent in the definition section) ARP priority level -> priority in two places of clause 5.7.2.2 which speak about the priority of the service Introduction of new section 6.2.5.0 to avoid hanging paragraph under 6.2.5. Nudm_UEContextManagement_DeregistrationNotification to Nudm_UECM_DeregistrationNotification in clause 5.3.3.2.5 Fix typos in clause 5.8.2.5.3 Add space in clauses 5.8.2.8.4, 8.3.4 Remove redundant or unnecessary space in clauses 5.16.4.1, 5.30.3.3, 6.2.23, 7.1.1 e.g to e.g. in clause 5.17.2.2.1 An gNB to A gNB in clause 5.17.7.2.1 Remove unnecessary a in clause 6.2.23 Missing RP added in clause 4.2.7 Replaced 'port ID' with port number in clause 5.6.7.1 (change proposed in S2-2005226) Added NOTE 1a in clause 5.18.1 (change proposed in S2-2005465r08; according to the SA WG2#140E CC#2 minutes, this CR 'should be a candidate for adding to the Rel-16 'mega' clean-up CR'. Move Note to correct place in clause 5.7.1.1 together with small rewording (replacing the unspecific word 'above' to avoid this problem in the future). Move Non-GBR to the front of the list in bullet 1 in clause 5.7.3.1 to avoid misinterpretation that Delay-critical Non-GBR could exist. Correct terminology 'Delay critical' -> 'Delay-critical' Correct terminology 'non-GBR' -> 'Non-GBR' Correct terminology 'Resource Type' -> 'resource type' Correct terminology 'priority level' -> 'Priority Level' in clause 5.16.5 first three occurrences and 5.16.6 first occurrence (as the 5QI Priority Level is meant) Correct terminology 'priority level' -> 'priority' in clause 5.16.5 last occurrence and 5.16.6 last occurrence (as the priority of the service is meant) Correct terminology 5GLAN Group -> 5G VN Group Correct terminology Application ID -> Application Identifier Clarify 5G QoS Flow is same as QoS Flow in the definition.","secretary_remarks":"r02 agreed. Revised to S2-2009347.","agenda_item_sort_order":6,"ainumber":"4.2","ainame":"Mega editorial CRs for TS 23.501 \/ TS 23.502 \/ TS 23.503","tdoc_agenda_sort_order":11060,"status":"revised","reservation_date":"2020-11-09 21:45:56","uploaded":"2020-11-09 22:44:28","revisionof":"","revisedto":"S2-2009347","release":"Rel-16","crspec":"23.501","crspecversion":"16.6.0","workitem":[{"winame":"5GS_Ph1"},{"winame":"TEI16"}],"crnumber":2523.0,"crrevision":"","crcategory":"F","tsg_crp":"","lsreplyto":"","lsto":"","Cc":"","lsoriginalls":"","lsreply":"","link":"https:\/\/www.3gpp.org\/ftp\/tsg_sa\/WG2_Arch\/TSGS2_142e_Electronic\/Docs\/S2-2009068.zip","group":"S2","meeting":"S2-142-e","year":2020,"uicc_affected":null,"me_affected":null,"ran_affected":null,"cn_affected":null,"clauses_affected":null,"crsinpack":null,"crsinpacknumber":0},
{"name":"S2-2009208","title":"General cleanup of specification","source":"Ericsson","contact":"Shabnam Sultana","contact-id":21207,"tdoctype":"CR","for":"Approval","abstract":"Summary of change: [Change-1, impacted clauses: 4.3.2] Remove '(s)' in 'PDU Session ID is not used for any existing PDU Session(s) of the UE' [Change-2, impacted clauses: 4.11.1.2.1] Step 18 of \u00a7 4.11.1.2.1 changed to refer to step 18 instead of step 11 of clause 5.5.1.2.2 in TS 23.401 [Change-3, impacted clauses: 4.11.2.3] Figure 4.11.2.3-1 step 6 aligned with step description and last valid step to refer to i.e. 'steps 15-19c' [Change-4, impacted clauses: 4.11.2.2] Step 7 and step 10 of Figure 4.11.2.2-1 corrected referenced figure and TS 23.401. [Change-5, impacted clauses: 4.11.2.3] Not existing reference removed from step 1 [Change-6, impacted clauses: 4.3.3.2] Step description in Step 1b in 4.3.3.2 is aliged with the figure. [Change-7, impacted clauses: 4.2.2.2.2] Step 14d of figure 4.2.2.2.2-1 changed 'Nudm_UECM_DeregistrationNotify' to 'Nudm_UECM_DeregistrationNotification' [Change-8, impacted clauses: 5.2.3.5.2, 5.2.3.5.3, 5.2.3.5.4, 5.2.3.6.2, 5.2.3.6.3, 5.2.3.6.4, 5.2.3.6.5, 5.2.3.7.2, 5.2.3.7.3, 5.2.5.5.4, 5.2.5.7.2, 5.2.5.7.3, 5.2.5.7.4, 5.2.6.2.2, 5.2.6.2.3, 5.2.6.2.4, 5.2.6.3.2, 5.2.6.3.3, 5.2.6.3.4, 5.2.6.3.5, 5.2.6.3.6, 5.2.6.3.7, 5.2.6.3.8, 5.2.6.4.2, 5.2.6.4.3, 5.2.6.4.4, 5.2.6.4.5, 5.2.6.5.2, 5.2.6.5.3, 5.2.6.6.2, 5.2.6.6.3, 5.2.6.6.4, 5.2.6.7.2, 5.2.6.7.3, 5.2.6.7.4, 5.2.6.7.4A, 5.2.6.7.5, 5.2.6.7.6, 5.2.6.8.2, 5.2.6.8.3, 5.2.6.8.4, 5.2.6.9.2, 5.2.6.9.3, 5.2.6.9.4, 5.2.6.9.5, 5.2.6.10.2, 5.2.6.11.2, 5.2.6.11.3, 5.2.6.11.4, 5.2.6.11.5, 5.2.6.12.2, 5.2.6.12.3, 5.2.6.12.4, 5.2.6.13.2, 5.2.6.13.3, 5.2.6.13.4, 5.2.6.13.5, 5.2.6.14.2, 5.2.6.14.3, 5.2.6.14.4, 5.2.6.15.2, 5.2.6.15.3, 5.2.6.15.4, 5.2.6.15.5, 5.2.6.16.2, 5.2.6.16.3, 5.2.6.16.4, 5.2.6.17.2, 5.2.6.17.3, 5.2.6.17.4, 5.2.6.18.2, 5.2.6.18.3, 5.2.6.19.2, 5.2.6.19.3, 5.2.6.19.4, 5.2.6.21.2, 5.2.18.2.1, 5.2.18.2.2, 5.2.18.2.3 ] Align service operations with the template in clause A.5 i.e.replace all 'Outputs (required)' with ' Outputs, Required' 'Outputs (optional)' with 'Outputs, Optional' 'Inputs (required)' with 'Inputs, Required' 'Inputs (optional)' with 'Inputs, Optional' [Change-9, impacted clauses: 4.2.3.2, 4.9.2.2, 4.11.5.2, 4.11.5.4, 4.12.8] Correcting usage of '3GPP' and '3G access' to 3GPP access. Figure 4.9.2.2-1 step 3 corrected. Also, correcting non-3GPP to 'non-3GPP access' when applicable. 'PDU Session via 3GPP PDU Session' changed to ' PDU Session via 3GPP access'. [Change-10, impacted clauses: 4.15.4.1] In clause 4.15.4.1 '3GPP NFs' changed to '5GC NFs' and 'are' changed to 'is'. [Change-11, impacted clauses: 5.2.3.3.1] Allowed area changed to Allowed Area [Change-12, impacted clauses: 4.8.2.2, 4.8.2.3, 4.11.1.2.1, 4.12.2.1, 4.12.2.2, 4.12.5, 4.12.6, 4.12.7, 4.12a.2.1, 4.12a.2.2, 4.12a.5, 4.12a.7, 4.12b.1, 4.12b.2, 4.13.3.8, 4.22.7, 4.22.10.3] Replace all access network with Acess Network, and radio access network with NG-RAN as applicable. [Change-13, impacted clauses: 4.13.6.1] In step 7, the reference to the N2 based HO procedure in EPS fallback for IMS voice procedure in removed and the reference to the 5GS to EPS HO procedure (4.11.1.2.1) is moved to appropriate part of the sentence. [Change-14, impacted clauses: many as 300+ usage of PGW-C+SMF] Replace all PGW-C+SMF, SMF\/PGW with SMF+PGW-C And the ' SMF+PGW-C+PGW-C ' with ' SMF+PGW-C ' Also replace 'PGW \/ SMF \/ UPF' to ' SMF+PGW-C ' in Figures 4.13.6.1-1 and 4.13.6.3-1. [Change-15, impacted clauses: 4.2.2.2.2] Change IAB node to IAB-node [Change-16, impacted clauses: 4.12.2.3] Change Allowed S-NSSAI to Allowed NSSAI. [Change-17, impacted clauses: 4.2.2.2.3, 4.2.7.1, 4.2.8a, 4.23.4.3] Change to consistent usage of AMF Set e.g. not AMF set. [Change-18, impacted clauses: 4.4.3.5, 5.2.5.3.2, 5.2.5.3.3, 5.2.6.2.2, 5.2.7.2.2, 5.2.8.3.1, 5.2.12.2.1, 5.2.19.2.2] Change Application identifier to Application Identifier when an IE Also, change Application ID to Application Identifier (also in Figure 4.4.3.5-1) [Change-19, impacted clause: 2] Make [4], [5], [11], [14], [19],","secretary_remarks":"Revision of S2-2008428r05 (+ editorial corrections). 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{"name":"S2-2009346","title":"General cleanup of specification","source":"Huawei (Rapporteur)","contact":"Marco Spini","contact-id":8356,"tdoctype":"CR","for":"Approval","abstract":"Summary of change: The following changes are proposed: Terminology corrections (PDU Session, QoS Flow, 5GS Bridge, Session-AMBR) Replacement of 'Application ID' with 'Application descriptor' in clause 6.1.2.2 and Annex A to align with the definition and the URSP rule structure in clause 6.6.2.1 Replacement of 'Application ID' with 'application identifier' in clause 6.1.2.3.1 to align with the rest of the text in the clause Abbreviation added for Background Data Transfer (BDT) and used consistently as BDT Policy in clause 6.1.2.4 Removal of double mentioning of 'network area information' in clause 6.1.2.4 Correction of Note 11 in clause 6.1.3.5 ('DN failure'->'DDN failure') Usage of correct terms 'Authorized Session-AMBR' and 'Authorized default 5QI\/ARP' in clause 6.1.3.6 and 6.2.2.4 Correction of terminology ('IEEE 802.1') and addition of references in clause 6.1.3.23 (originally proposed by S2-2004907) Addition of missing 'DN authorized' to 'Session AMBR' in clause 6.2.1.2 Replacement of 'SM-related' with 'session management related' in clause 6.2.1.4 and 6.2.1.5 Completion of sentence in 6.2.9 Correction of punctuation and upper\/lower case starting letter in several lists including Annexes Several editorial corrections (e.g. typos) Make [7] Void in clause 2 because this is not referred Add specific clauses for V2X Policy content to the reference to TS 23.287","secretary_remarks":"Revision of S2-2008697r01. Approved","agenda_item_sort_order":6,"ainumber":"4.2","ainame":"Mega editorial CRs for TS 23.501 \/ TS 23.502 \/ TS 23.503","tdoc_agenda_sort_order":11050,"status":"agreed","reservation_date":"2020-11-26 07:12:49","uploaded":"2020-11-26 07:31:17","revisionof":"S2-2008697","revisedto":"","release":"Rel-16","crspec":"23.503","crspecversion":"16.6.0","workitem":[{"winame":"TEI16"},{"winame":"5GS_Ph1"}],"crnumber":503.0,"crrevision":1.0,"crcategory":"F","tsg_crp":"SP-200959","lsreplyto":"","lsto":"","Cc":"","lsoriginalls":"","lsreply":"","link":"https:\/\/www.3gpp.org\/ftp\/tsg_sa\/WG2_Arch\/TSGS2_142e_Electronic\/Docs\/S2-2009346.zip","group":"S2","meeting":"S2-142-e","year":2020,"uicc_affected":null,"me_affected":null,"ran_affected":null,"cn_affected":null,"clauses_affected":null,"crsinpack":null,"crsinpacknumber":0},
{"name":"S2-2009347","title":"Mega CR to clean up","source":"Nokia, Nokia Shanghai Bell (Rapporteur)","contact":"Devaki Chandramouli","contact-id":68275,"tdoctype":"CR","for":"Approval","abstract":"Summary of change: High level changes summarized: Definition for pre-configured QoS (already existing text in QoS section made more prominent in the definition section) ARP priority level -> priority in two places of clause 5.7.2.2 which speak about the priority of the service Introduction of new section 6.2.5.0 to avoid hanging paragraph under 6.2.5. Nudm_UEContextManagement_DeregistrationNotification to Nudm_UECM_DeregistrationNotification in clause 5.3.3.2.5 Fix typos in clause 5.8.2.5.3 Add space in clauses 5.8.2.8.4, 8.3.4 Remove redundant or unnecessary space in clauses 5.16.4.1, 5.30.3.3, 6.2.23, 7.1.1 e.g to e.g. in clause 5.17.2.2.1 An gNB to A gNB in clause 5.17.7.2.1 Remove unnecessary an in clause 6.2.23 Missing RP added in clause 4.2.7 Replaced 'port ID' with port number in clause 5.6.7.1 (change proposed in S2-2005226) Added NOTE 1a in clause 5.18.1 (change proposed in S2-2005465r08; according to the SA WG2#140E CC#2 minutes, this CR 'should be a candidate for adding to the Rel-16 'mega' clean-up CR'. Move Note to correct place in clause 5.7.1.1 together with small rewording (replacing the unspecific word 'above' to avoid this problem in the future). Move Non-GBR to the front of the list in bullet 1 in clause 5.7.3.1 to avoid misinterpretation that Delay-critical Non-GBR could exist. Correct terminology 'Delay critical' -> 'Delay-critical' Correct terminology 'non-GBR' -> 'Non-GBR' Correct terminology 'Resource Type' -> 'resource type' Correct terminology 'priority level' -> 'Priority Level' in clause 5.16.5 first three occurrences and 5.16.6 first occurrence (as the 5QI Priority Level is meant) Correct terminology 'priority level' -> 'priority' in clause 5.16.5 last occurrence and 5.16.6 last occurrence (as the priority of the service is meant) Correct terminology 5GLAN Group -> 5G VN Group Correct terminology Application ID -> Application Identifier\/application identifier (as appropriate); Application identifier -> application identifier Clarify 5G QoS Flow is same as QoS Flow in the definition. Section 4.2.4 theVPLMN -> the VPLMN 5.2.5.3 - fixing indentation. 5.34.3 - add \/V-SMF selection.","secretary_remarks":"Revision of S2-2009068r02. Approved","agenda_item_sort_order":6,"ainumber":"4.2","ainame":"Mega editorial CRs for TS 23.501 \/ TS 23.502 \/ TS 23.503","tdoc_agenda_sort_order":11070,"status":"agreed","reservation_date":"2020-11-26 07:12:50","uploaded":"2020-11-26 07:31:17","revisionof":"S2-2009068","revisedto":"","release":"Rel-16","crspec":"23.501","crspecversion":"16.6.0","workitem":[{"winame":"5GS_Ph1"},{"winame":"TEI16"}],"crnumber":2523.0,"crrevision":1.0,"crcategory":"F","tsg_crp":"SP-200959","lsreplyto":"","lsto":"","Cc":"","lsoriginalls":"","lsreply":"","link":"https:\/\/www.3gpp.org\/ftp\/tsg_sa\/WG2_Arch\/TSGS2_142e_Electronic\/Docs\/S2-2009347.zip","group":"S2","meeting":"S2-142-e","year":2020,"uicc_affected":null,"me_affected":null,"ran_affected":null,"cn_affected":null,"clauses_affected":null,"crsinpack":null,"crsinpacknumber":0}]